To improve the content of this: 'on running' - ongoing. you would challenge the rule of thirds, not disobey it. Dyer is supposed to be use explicitly, which means introducing him and using more of the key words to consider the relevent elements of his theory to your artist. You also need to finish the theory off my saying why this is important to audiences. Notes on the slides and exemplar you were given. I suggest that you present this in a different way rather than a blog post to access high grades.
To improve the content of this: 'on running' - ongoing. you would challenge the rule of thirds, not disobey it. Dyer is supposed to be use explicitly, which means introducing him and using more of the key words to consider the relevent elements of his theory to your artist. You also need to finish the theory off my saying why this is important to audiences. Notes on the slides and exemplar you were given. I suggest that you present this in a different way rather than a blog post to access high grades.
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